Challenges and Ideas

We do a number of challenges at Denver Fiction Writers. These result in some interesting short stories and a chance to see us stretch our comfort zone. Some of us have to wait until the inspiration strikes.

I know. If you just wait for inspiration, you’ll never get any writing done. As writer, I tend to have a backlog of ideas though. When I write, I stick any ideas that come up in a file and then I have those to go back on once I finish my current project.

Getting ideas is a whole nother ball game. I’ve gotten them from watching clouds, from crazy dreams, and magazine clippings. If one idea meshes with another, I combine them until I think I have enough for a story.

When it comes to challenges, I tend to the be the late one. I’ve only made one by the deadline. That’s not an excuse not to do them. Stretching your writing wings is important. It lets you play with other worlds and toy with words. What writer wouldn’t want to do that?

I’m just slow.

The Joys of English and the Psuedo Loss of the Oxford Comma

I’m always amused by the English language. There is a joke (button/Tshirt) that says the English language leads nice languages down back alleys, then beats them and steals words and grammar from it, leaving the language to die. We have nothing on the Japanese, who has a whole alphabet (syllabry if you’re nasty) dedicated to stuff they’ve taken from other languages not counting the apprehension of an entire system of pictographs from another language.

That being said, English is a living language. It’s used around the world and can vary night and day by region. Think about it this way. I took seven years of Spanish between middle and high school. Yet, I was ill prepared to be an exchange student in Mexico. How you may be asking? Well the way you ask for the check in Spain will get you beaten up in Mexico, mainly because it’s not nice to ask the waiter to masturbate for you.

The point is, what you learn in school doesn’t apply in real life. That goes for English too.

I’m sure you heard the news today that Oxford is dropping the serial comma from their style book. This has been a trend in writing for a while. Both AP and Chicago Style allow for no comma before ‘and’. In fiction writing style guides may or may not be used but I know, I’ve confused a few of my fellow critiquers by using AP style in my novel and short story. (Hey, it confused me too. Taught me to be clear about what I was doing when I ask for line edits.)

The shock and aw over what goes where in a sentence (is there punctuation rules in any other language as complicated as those in the English language?) depends on what you were taught in school, what you had to use to work and what the folks around you use. As a living language, words and punctuation change all the time, despite dictionaries and style guides.

Word usage is what really gets me though. I’m sure you heard in school that contractions are not really words and should never be used, only to have them appear on spelling tests the next year? There have been screaming matches at the use of a lot. Or in my own manuscripts I’ve had editors and critiques tell me to use all right instead of alright. Then the next batch will tell me that alright is correct. Hell, in Word, which I have set in AP Style finds alright correct in the former sentence and incorrect in the latter.

The key is to be consistent. Once you decide how to present your prose stick to that. If your publisher has a style guide they want used they’ll tell you (or put it in the submission guidelines. I have seven versions of ‘Get’em While You Can’ because of grammar requests differ depending on market.) It’s not going to kill you to remove the comma before ‘and’.

I’d say goodbye to the serial comma but I haven’t used it in years.

Landmarks

It’s been an interesting year in my writing career for me.

I’ve had my first print publication from Cutting Block Press, to be released in August in their new anthology, Tattered Souls 2.

I’ve been to my first convention as an author with something being sold and celebrated at the convention. There, I signed my first autograph for a complete stranger.

And now I’m taking on my first novel editing commission as a freelance editor from someone I didn’t personally know.

It’s been pretty amazing. I’d like to describe all these processes, so you can see what they’re like from the inside.

I submitted ‘Becka’, my horror novella, to a few places before Cutting Block Press. I approached the submission process with a strong amount of confidence in the work. I’ve submitted short stories before, to lots of places. Following standard advice at the time, I usually submitted with the philosophy that if you start at the top (in pay terms) and go by what genre and general type of story the magazine likes, you’ll eventually get there. That didn’t really happen.

With ‘Becka’, I had a much smaller field to go through – it’s not easy getting novella length work into print. But I knew it was a fantastic story (no false modesty here). And so I approached it with the attitude of finding a worthy home for it – somewhere that it would fit in to the attitude and desires and body of work of the press in question. The second place I looked happened to be Cutting Block, and I sent it off really hoping they would accept it, because they were right for the story. And it got accepted.

Later I found out they were having a release party for it at the World Horror Convention in Austin, which happens to be a place where I have relatives. I also had a friend who wanted to take me to Florida and could sort of fold a trip to the convention into the general vacation. Now, let’s be clear: that meant I didn’t have to pay anything in particular for this trip. Travel costs, convention entry, all covered. As an ENTRY LEVEL published writer, I would strongly recommend not spending much to go to conventions where your stuff is published – it’s fun and exciting, but makes zero financial sense and there’s not that big a boost to your career. Go to your local ones, because they offer so many benefits that it’s worth the entry costs. But when you factor in hotels and flights, better wait till your career demands it.

That said, I learned a lot. I mostly learned about the horror community. Now, be aware that I’m comparing it to the SF/Fantasy community, which is mostly where I spend my time. In comparison, I found that the horror convention was much smaller. Smaller even than my local Denver SF convention, Mile Hi Con. And this was the WORLD Horror Convention.

Everyone I met at the convention was wonderful. Nice people, friendly and interested (and interesting). Interestingly, everyone I met was a writer, or an artist, or a publisher, or an editor, or attending with one of the above. I do mean everyone. At Mile Hi Con you have a large surrounding flood of readers, appreciators and people who come to meet the writers/editors. Yes, nearly every SF fan is an aspiring writer somewhere in the closet of his soul, just like me. But at the horror convention, the attendees were almost universally in the biz. These people were primarily selling to one another.

It may be as a direct consequence of that, but I also felt that there was a strong uniformity to cover design, art and clothing of choice – all of which were black, with a strong iconic image and/or statement.

It was all very interesting and I enjoyed it greatly. There were some fascinating panels. As usual, the combat panel, staffed by ordinary looking people who could tear you into small pieces if necessary, dissolved into anecdotes – they do that at the SF conventions too and it’s always a blast. I had a great time manning the booth for Cutting Block, quizzing anybody who sat with me about aspects of the business that I wasn’t fully familiar with yet. Learned a lot there, too, especially about when it is and isn’t useful to sell your own books. And I signed an autograph or two for people I’d never met, which I count as a landmark too.

Good stuff, and I had a great time. Conclusions: there’s lots of room for innovative new writers in the horror field, and make sure you spend your money wisely when considering conventions.

And finally, the freelance editing section of my website garnered a customer for the first time. As you know if you’ve been reading this site or following me on Twitter, the marvelous Jeff Kirvin got me into the whole editing thing, flooring me a year ago or so by asking me to do this job I’d never considered at all. Like Miles Vorkosigan, I never thought this was a job that had any reference to me, but I took to it like a bat to warm blood. The term addiction may be useful here.

So these are the landmarks of my career recently. It’s not all been roses – I seem to be rather stuck in terms of getting any writing of my own done recently, for example. I’ve been through patches like that before, however. And health issues have really interfered with things in the last months. But that’s hopefully going to turn around.

The future looks interesting. Thanks so much for being part of it. And now, if you’ll excuse me, I have work to do…