A writer or an artist?

Throughout my school career, I loved art. In fact, when I graduated high school, I enrolled in the Colorado Institute of Art for Computer Animation – which is how I ended up here in Denver. I thought at the time that my art was my life, but I soon learned that I was not an “artist.” I didn’t have the right type of thinking to really fit in with the hard-core “artists” around me.

Disheartened, I quit school, and felt very much like a drifter for a few years. I refused to pick up pencil or paintbrush and consequently forgot quite a bit of what I’d learned.

Then, one day, my mother sent something to me. It was a book on writing that some well-meaning relative had given me for my sixth birthday. I looked over the pages and the memories came flooding back. I used to write. Not just as a six-year-old, but well into my high school years. I had given it up to concentrate on my art.

So here I am now, a writer, and happy for it. However, my love of drawing never really went away. I still do it, but I am more cautious; I call my drawings “doodles” and no more than that.

Still, it’s a great deal of fun to combine my writing with my doodling. I like to draw the characters I write about. See, this is what s/he looks like!

I’ve done several doodles for the manuscript I’m currently working on, “Blue Tiger.” I’ve attached the latest one.

How many of us are creative in more ways than one?

Jestler, drawn by Rachel DuChene

Peer Pressure Writing Night and the Demonwich

Peer Pressure Writing Night is something I look forward to every week. A small group of us meet up Thursday nights at the River Point Panera and . . . well, we may not get a lot of writing done, but we sure do laugh a lot.

One week gave birth to the “demonwich.” It happened by way of Jeff’s submission for the critique group that week, which was in plain text. When a couple of us opened the file in MS Word, some of the formatting was kludgy – it happens. Not a big deal. But Robin got a kick out of a line that had the words “demon” and “which” separated by a dash and no spaces, resulting in “demon-which.” While the SS Pickle sailed around our table (crafted out of a dill quarter for the boat, a couple of toothpicks for masts, and a torn-up napkin for sails by Kathleen), we laughed at the idea of a demon sandwich, complete, as Ariel put in, with a pitchfork in place of those decorative toothpicks.

Writers are a wonderful group of people. We all have our quirks, and many of us are either too shy or too loud, but we love the process of creation. Sometimes, the best kind of creation comes out of a spontaneous group brainstorm that has us laughing through the whole meeting. I urge any writer to join us; you’ll find yourself refreshed and motivated by like-minded people.

And besides. There’s a sale on demonwiches.

demonwich

Ariel’s Article 1

I count myself as a novice writer. I’ve been scribbling things for a long time, but I’ve only really started working on my ability recently. And of course I’ve had some bad habits to break. Although one that I didn’t even know I had concerned character back story and world building.

Up till recently, I’ve been having serious issues about three-fourths into the plot of whatever story I was working on. Things got tangled, complicated, or I’d lose track of something and end up painting myself into a corner.

So I decided to try something new. I’d heard before from my Teacher that working on a character’s back story helps to open up the plot and keeps the story going. So I sat down and made myself start writing out a character’s back story, starting from when she was a little kid. It actually made me a little nervous to try something I’d never done before, embarrassing as it is to admit. But once I started, I found myself with hand cramps from writing so much and an almost complete story in front of me. It was a little surprising, I didn’t know I even had it in me before I started. It isn’t surprising that I was going about writing in a way that didn’t work for me at all. -_-U

Now that I’ve finally found a way that works for me, world building, and making a plot that doesn’t look like Swiss cheese is so much easier! And fun too, which is good cause there’s nothing that kills writing more then it not being any fun.

Character Flaw

I love lists. I tend to forget to use them but I love them none the less. I also like charts, graphs, and other visual reminders on how to do things. I think that is due to the math/science-based jobs I have had for a large majority for my adult life. Cheat sheet were the de rigueur.

Most, if not all, of you have seen a character sheet or used one so the one I’m going to post  probably has a lot of things you’ve seen before, like height, weight, eye color, things of that nature. I like this one because it has things like habits, what is the bedroom like (you can tell a lot about a person by how they keep their room), character flaws, nuances that really can breath life into your character.

I don’t use this list all the time but I have used it enough that I can run a new characters traits in my head. Like I’ve said, I love list but forget to use hem. I guess I’d mark that as a character flaw on my character list.

Character Developement list

What is his/her name?

Age?

Height?   
Body shape?
Hair color, skin color?
Job?
Favorite saying? 
Favorite color?

Typical outfit to wear? 
Method of transportation?

Immediate plan(with their life)?
Long-range goal(s)?
Kind of education?  
What kind of house/home/apartment?
What city/country/location?
Does he/she have a pet? Why/why not? 
Best friend? 
Favorite food?

Financial situation?
Hobby?
Skill?

Moral attitude?
Philosophical attitude (beliefs)?

Favorite book? Last-read book? Fav:  Last:
What is the bedroom like?

Spouse/mate/steady date/significant other? Why/why not? 

Parents? Siblings? Kids?
Pet peeves?

Habits(both good and bad)?

Place of birth?

Nationality?
Distinguishing marks (tattoos, scars, etc,)? .

Disabilities/physical deformity?  

Character flaws:

Good Qualities:

Divorcing Yourself From Your Character

Well now, this is tricky.

You’ve had something horrible happen to you…or maybe something great. And you’ve decided to turn it into a story. You fictionalize it, add some magic, some name changes and bam, you have…

Crap.

You do, you really do. I know this really happened to you but this isn’t you any more. This is a character whose story is based of events in your life. You thought ly darlings were hard to kill…well nothing compares to the bitches that are you. This not only Mary Sue, it’s Super Mary Sue: the Armageddon.

1. Emotional Investment.

The emotional attachment you have to your characters is pretty tight. But when that character is really living your life you can’t bare the thought of parting with those details. A lot of times you’re writing the story to get it out of you, to break that black hole into little pieces and stomp them into dust. So do it, write the whole damn thing out. Don’t stop, edit or add. Just write.

Then put it away.

Not for a month, or six but for a year. You have to remove yourself from the process of bleeding on the page. Why so long? Because this isn’t only your story…it’s you and it can’t be if it’s going to get good.

2. But It’s My Life

No, it’s not. It’s your characters life. You’re going to have to edit the crap of this to answer questions like why aren’t the police involved, why on gods earth did you say yes and similar questions. Don’t rationalize your decisions, if it is a bad one in a story (though it may be great for real life) then toss it out and change it. What begins as a cathartic exercise can either stay that way or become story.

3. Decisions

It was cathartic to get it out…maybe killing the bad guy in the story but…can it really be more than that? Look at it…would you really have read this on your own. Is there really a market for this? Maybe it needs to go back in that drawer.  Maybe it’d be best to burn it.

I wrote about one of the most painful periods of my life, when I had no friends to turn to, no one to talk to and my entire life was falling appart. I didn’t embellish, add or fantasize I wrote down the horror in its entirety let it sit. Later when I came back to it (and had critique comments, ugh) I realized the crap for what it was, a way to get all the horrible things out of my being.

Whisper to yourself, but this true, realize that no one cares and go write a good story.

Originally published at MJN